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lima (all pronouns)'s avatar

I looooove the stylistic choice of the flashback being in full color and the present (presumably) being black and white! that's such a cool reversion of a popular trope! and this story looks super engaging already, im excited for more!

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Jade King's avatar

This has been so lovely to read! Amazing to see the full first chapter out in the wild after talking with you about it too, now I'm the dark and can see where it all goes from here.

The Bleacher's Wild Heart is so perfect for that final scene, I just want things to go well for Mags and Nessa ;_;

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GW Wolf's avatar

Very cool, very intense.

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Marta Marchello's avatar

This is amazing!

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Robin's avatar

This is so good! I can't wait to see where it goes from here. You're such a good storyteller

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Kai Morgan's avatar

Looks so good!! 💙

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Camryn Porter's avatar

Okay this is SO good, I am already hooked! I love your layout style in this format

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Hyperfixationing's avatar

I'm so excited I can finally read this! The art and story look amazing so far, and I'm interested to see where it goes!

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Hyperfixationing's avatar

AAAA accidentally posted the comment twice lol

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Peg's avatar

aaaa awesome first chapter! so excited :)

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Alolupine's avatar

Thank you for sharing! I am excited to read more

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John Romkey's avatar

I've really been enjoying this, thank you :)

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B.A. Lampman's avatar

Nicely done... very engaging

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magicman's avatar

yo this is awesome!!! really hooked me in those last few sentences

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DK's avatar

Wow, this seems so good! I love it already :)

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Grace Demopoulos's avatar

I love this so so much gosh,,, looking forward to more. Such compelling storytelling.

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finnflams's avatar

Ahhhh this looks so good!!!! I feel so invested already

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