I looooove the stylistic choice of the flashback being in full color and the present (presumably) being black and white! that's such a cool reversion of a popular trope! and this story looks super engaging already, im excited for more!
This has been so lovely to read! Amazing to see the full first chapter out in the wild after talking with you about it too, now I'm the dark and can see where it all goes from here.
The Bleacher's Wild Heart is so perfect for that final scene, I just want things to go well for Mags and Nessa ;_;
I looooove the stylistic choice of the flashback being in full color and the present (presumably) being black and white! that's such a cool reversion of a popular trope! and this story looks super engaging already, im excited for more!
This has been so lovely to read! Amazing to see the full first chapter out in the wild after talking with you about it too, now I'm the dark and can see where it all goes from here.
The Bleacher's Wild Heart is so perfect for that final scene, I just want things to go well for Mags and Nessa ;_;
Very cool, very intense.
This is amazing!
This is so good! I can't wait to see where it goes from here. You're such a good storyteller
Looks so good!! 💙
Okay this is SO good, I am already hooked! I love your layout style in this format
I'm so excited I can finally read this! The art and story look amazing so far, and I'm interested to see where it goes!
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aaaa awesome first chapter! so excited :)
Thank you for sharing! I am excited to read more
I've really been enjoying this, thank you :)
Nicely done... very engaging
yo this is awesome!!! really hooked me in those last few sentences
Wow, this seems so good! I love it already :)
I love this so so much gosh,,, looking forward to more. Such compelling storytelling.
Ahhhh this looks so good!!!! I feel so invested already